I really like these lyrics :)
Keep up the good work
Jun 25, 2009 Rating
Starting from the top by: Doc Haley
Bey Bad Dreams:
Here is what you wrote and you said this is a country song. Remember how country folk talk?
Verse
You slammed the door in my face
Said you was going to your mommas place
You would not be back to stay
Only to get the rest of your things
And the last words I heard you say
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What I would have preferred you to write IMHO:
E
You slammed the door right in my face
A
Going to yo mommas place
E B7
Won't be coming back to stay.
E
You'll return to get yo things
A
And drop off your wedding ring
E B7 E
These were the last words I'd hear you say.
To follow up on what i have been saying about melodies accompanying lyrics I included the basic chords that this song could be sung to. Just one of many options.
Hope it helps, feel free to use my lyrics and melody layout without obligation.
Cya
Doc
