Like I told one writer before. I was first tought to humm a melody, it can be one of a song you know or one you just made up, then try to sing the lyrics in the place of the humm. I have had the best success using that method.
Jun 22, 2009 Rating
some info by: Doc Haley
First don't use an intro.
Stick with what the system wants.
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V
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C
song break
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C
end song
They will change it anyway if they like it so why not go with what they, the system, wants?
Yes there are exceptions. This ain't one of them.
Secondly
You got a good basic song but your wording is disturbing to the tongue.
Try to sing it to a melody. Something lyricists never do and is a shame.
If you, the author, can't sing it to a tune, no one else will be able to so the song will go no place.
You, the author, need to provide a melody. Maybe just chords that are playable on a keyboard or an acoustic guitar to give the listener an idea of what you are trying to present.
