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Carry On - pop/rock (sorta like safetysuits sound or switchfoot)

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Nov 28, 2009
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Your Song
by: Anonymous

I think this song is great. The lyrics are fabulous. I can really find the meaning of the song. I really love this song.

Oct 16, 2009
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Great potential
by: Matt

Good rock lyrics. It's songs like this that remind us that lyrics can be a series of snapshots, it doesn't always have to be a moving picture that captures a specific story from beginning to end. The only criticism that I would offer is that the chorus seems a little long in relation to the verses. Maybe change up the last refrain or find some room to sneak a bridge in there to give some new information before the last refrain.

Aug 03, 2009
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Dang Thats good
by: Alay

Wow o.k. this is really good. As i was reading it i hadn't even noticed but i started to get into a tune. it seems like a really fun song to sing? it really connects with the audience i think. The lyrics are great bc they rhym & them by themselves r just good too. I personally like the format myself.

Great Work,
Alay

Jun 12, 2009
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Very Good : )
by: Dan

Hello,firstly,I'd like to say I really like your lyrics,I think they are very honest. What i have noticed from your lyrics is how it's so obvious that you had the tune of the song in mind when you wrote the lyrics,or so it seems to me,so I was just wondering wether people find it easier writing to a tune or just writing the lyrics on their own?

Jun 05, 2009
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New format
by: Anonymous

You have some good lyrics and if you'll clean them up a bit where you can read it more easily in a rhyming fashion it'll sing easier.

One thing i found out is the VCVCVC format is frowned upon these days. I have no idea why but it is.

You may have to set it up in a
V
V
B
C
Song Break
V
C
End song

to get many sources to listen to it seriously.

3 minutes is king still it seems but for what reason, i have no idea.

CYa
Doc

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