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down lyrics-alternative

by Steven Becerra
(Fresno, California, USA)

down lyrics

lie about the truth that i already know,
I'm looking for somewhere, somewhere to go,
I'm trapped here with you and I'm feeling alone,
i know what i want but you wont let it show.


don't speak,
don't think,
don't breathe,
don't blink,
do you know what you are?


I'm going my way, a way you don't see
so far away, out away,
blue skis turned Gray, down on your knees,
down and out, falling out,
hate yourself, you're just a disease,
its all your fault, blame yourself,
now you're falling down just like me,
kicking and screaming, fading away,


down down down,
you pulled me,
down down down,
you dragged me,
down down down,
you forced me,
down down down, and you'll do it again.



just so you know, I'm not finished with it yet. its still a work in progress. needs more verse.

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