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Comments for
Empty Hearted lyrics - Rock

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Aug 14, 2011
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empty hearted
by: tyler

good job beautiful ending

Nov 11, 2009
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Doesn't quite set itself apart...
by: Anonymous

I think it's just a little simple. The overall message of the song is fine, but I would challenge you to use words and imagery that you don't hear every day. This will make the piece more interesting, and give it a unique quality - something it's lacking.

Sep 16, 2008
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Real
by: Anonymous

It's short but every voice paints a picture. I think with the right melody this could be a hit.

Jul 18, 2008
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very cool
by: Anonymous

i can actually imagine these lyrics in an real song. very dark mood for them.

Jun 27, 2008
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Painful but touching
by: Victoria Whitlock

your lyrics are filled with pain - I imagine the beat as very intense, fast-paced, no breathing allowed. Enjoyed them very much - hope to hear them in a song one day!

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