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jose
Jan 27, 2010 Rating
some of the same itssues by: Doc Haley
You still are using the old AABB in much of your writing.
Quit using words like AND to start a line and don't use them so much, they take away from the ability of a person to sing your lyrics to a basic melody.
Keep it going though, you may have a good tune in the end.
