[?] Subscribe To This Site

XML RSS
Add to Google
Add to My Yahoo!
Add to My MSN
Subscribe with Bloglines

Home
Donate To This Site
Win Free eBook
Beginner Songwriting
SongWriting Tips
SongWriting
Discussion Forum
Lyric Writing
Singer Songwriter
Get Lyric Feedback
Songwriter
How To Write A Song
SongWriting Store
Rhymes
Rhyming Dictionary
Thesaurus
SongWriting Software
SongWriting Blog
SongWriting Contests
Music Associations
Music Links
Sheet Music
Co-Write
Songwriting Resource
Online Music Courses
Object Writing
Songwriting Courses
Ask A Question
SiteSearch
Join My Newsletter
Contact Us
How I Built This Site
TV Links

Comments for
Gone Forever Lyrics

Average Rating starstar

Click here to add your own comments

Feb 16, 2010
Rating
starstar
need some melody/chords/?
by: Doc Haley

Need some sort of tempo/melody/chords ???? to do any real type of summary.
Lines are not balanced.
to understand this, set up a metronome at a tempo
you feel is good for your lyrics and see if you
can sing it to the beat and keep even balanced
measures and beats per measure.

You won't. Most of the time every set of lyrics come through this anyway so it's no big deal, but it has to work out with sheet music standards.

mix up the rhyming scheme, don't always use AABB, mix it up, you'd be surprised what it'll do for a song.

some lines are way too long to fit in with adjacent lines IMHO.

Keep at it, they all work out in the end, you just have to change some things here and there.

CYa
doc

Click here to add your own comments

Join in and write your own page! It's easy to do. How?
Simply click here to return to Lyric Feedback

Return to Gone Forever Lyrics


Take your songwriting, lyric writing, and poetry to a new level. I use MasterWriter to write all my songs and I love it. Buying from this site gives you a $20 discount off the purchase price.

Some of the top hit songwriters in the world use MasterWriter. Why not join David Foster, Gwen Stefani, Carole Bayer Sager, Kenneth Edmonds, Jimmy Webb, Rob Thomas, Jeffrey Steele, Kenny Loggins and many more who use MasterWriter?

You can also get a free download of a fully-functional 10-DAY trial of MasterWriter, with no obligation. Try it out and you'll see how special it is. The free trial is how I first tried it and I've never looked back.

Lyricist V3.0 might be all you want in lyric writing and chord charting. It provides Professional Quality Lyric Sheets as well as Chord Charts. Its also only $59.95.

Are you an aspiring or experienced songwriter or only want lyric sheets for your band, Lyricist helps you use your time to be creative.  its called “The Songwriter’s Best Friend”.

It provides: Rhyming Dictionary, Chord Charting and Editing, Transposition, Chord Wizard, Rich text editor for writing lyrics and other features.