Looks pretty good. Great subject. Think that adolescents would definitely relate, and they are lucrative audience. There are some things I would change, but it depends on the music. It's got enough button words and emotions to push people's hearts around. Music adds the magic.
This stuff is much harder than it appears. I commend you and anyone who lends their hand to it!
Feb 24, 2010 Rating
great by: Anonymous
really nice lyrics
Feb 09, 2010 Rating
great lyrics! by: Anonymous
Great lyrics...well structured and straight to the point.well done!
Jan 23, 2010 Rating
Good work on these lyrics! by: Chad Sharp
Hey! I actually really liked your lyrics! The chorus had the title mixed in enough to make it memorable. That is something many songwriters fail at. You did a great job incorporating the title into the hook. The song also had good structure. You knew exactly what the song was about when you got done reading it.
Good work.
- Chad
http://sharpmusic.wordpress.com
