I am still confuse

by Sweetie
(Norway)

Norway

How songwriter has his or hers ups and downs. I've been writing songs for a year or two now, and I am still confuse. I don't think the things that i write are good, although I've recieved feedbacks from friends saying that my songs are good, but I don't have a self-confidence.

Here is one the songs I've written, and if anyone out here could send me a feedback it would be great.

Never again

I've been in love so many times
Thought I knew the score so well
But I was all lost in my world
And now you've treated me so wrongly
I can't take it anymore
What did I see in you?
All the time you do me wrong
I just run back into your arms
Like something never happened

I am sick and tired of you playing with my heart
I am no longer your foolish girl
You can go with your everything babe
I’ve find myself, I’ve find myself

And…

Never again will I run into your arms
Never again will my world be crushed down by you
I say, never again, never again
Because, I’ve find myself