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Aug 20, 2009
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!!
by: Anonymous

great job i love the opening very forceful and wills someone to read it!!

Aug 13, 2009
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relation.
by: Anonymous

This song reminds me of my friend who tried to commit suicide. She called me one night saying goodbye, and I called 911. They put her in the hospital and we are no longer friends anymore, because she "hates where I put her."
I will continue to believe that I did the right thing. And I cannot continue any longer to try, because she still cuts herself, and has many problems. I cannot do anything any longer because she doesnt want help.

I think that this song was very well written and you put alot of time into it, or you had alot on your mind, and let it all come out into paper. I hope this song gets far.

Aug 02, 2009
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natural
by: Anonymous

this song has a true and natural rhythm to it and the words are very touching, obviously you have put your heart and soul into this song

Jul 08, 2009
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I like it
by: Anonymous

It's a good song and I can feel that u used your heart in writing it. I think you can go even further and reach further down into your heart because music is a gift and it will present itself to us you just gota close your eyes and listen to your heart and I believe you understand this because this song is deep but it could be even deeper if u pushed urself. I think I changes to suddenly but that would be ok depending on the actual music goes otherwise good job I like it

Jun 25, 2009
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Good Structure
by: James Hill

For starters, I played and wrote Rock music for along time and there are many types of rock music. I mainly do country music now but from what I read could see this song being performed in a NIckleback, 3 Dorrs Down, 3 Days Grace type style. The only thing with lyrics I would change would be The part where you say, "I watched the blood trickle from your viens." I would have wrote, "I watched the life trickle from your viens." Overall it's good and it has good structure.

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