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Just You And Me Lyrics

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Jan 08, 2010
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Confused
by: Doc Haley

You wrote

As we lock eyes tonight,
Everything seems so damn right,
There's not a star in the sky,
But there's no reason to cry,
When it's just you and me,
For miles to see.

Confusing to me; emotions of everything being right, but not a star in the sky?
No reason to cry

I have no idea where you may be going here but if you'll keep on one line of thought and toss those books that tell you which words rhyme and just go with a brief story reduced to poetry you'll do better.

I'm only trying to help

Cya
Doc

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