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Keeping it on lyrics - blues, acoustic rock

by M Lackey

Keeping it on lyrics

Haven't been on a songwriting since the old "newsgroups" years ago. Would like to find out who all is out there in this genre. I've written as a hobby for many years -- ever since disco ruined the radio :)

Fresh today, just need to finish the last line so any ideas welcome:

D G and A

D Well I had a good job and I had a good wife
I had a big boat and I had a big life
But I just couldn’t keep, just couldn’t keep on keeping it on
So I found a little space that I could call my own

Well it’s a tiny little space and it ain’t got no class
But it’s got a lot of windows all made of amber glass
But I just can’t keep, Just can’t keep on keeping it on
Well my place ain’t much, but when I crawl in, I can call it my home

I gave up all my friends and gave up my rights
Now I sail to Jamaica each and every night
Cause I just couldn’t keep, keep on keeping it on
Well my life wasn’t so bad, it just wasn’t no good for me

Well it was so hard to earn and so easy to loose
But when your spirit get’s broke you don’t get to choose
Choose to keep, keep on keeping it on
(YTBD)



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