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Languishing For Your Happiness lyrics- Taylor Swift-esque Country

by Fifi

Languishing For Your Happiness lyrics

Slow, E minor
Main concerns:
What, if anything should I cut (the fourth verse might make it a bit much)
Does it send a clear message?/Is it confusing (i realize to someone who doesn't know the situation, it might be)?
Any other constructive criticism

verse
I hate walking past you
Pretending I don't see you
Like I don't give a damn
Though you're part of who I am

And you forget I've called
Never pick up, just watch me fall
Then you want my advice
About her, I don't think twice

Chorus
But why do I do all this for you?
And let you do all that you do?
Have you forgot that sin you sinned?
Or all the hell you put me in?
Hell that you should have underwent
I'm languishing for your happiness
Your happiness

Said I was your Greek goddess
Your woman, your therapist
But I see I was just
A rose for you to destruct

And you still need my friendship
More pain, but still I give it
And you want my sympathy
The boy who cheated on me

Chorus

Bridge:
How can you not see you've cut me all these scars?
Not that you care, your happy where you are.

Chorus

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