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Last Goodbye - lyrics - Country

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Jan 18, 2010
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excellent
by: Anonymous

I'm new to this website but these lyrics are really good! I like the way your rhymes work and it's not so repetitive. It's really original and I wish I could hear it to a tune! good job.

Jan 01, 2010
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WONDERFUL
by: Anonymous

Great work! This is my favourite set of lyrics I have read in a long time... perhaps at the ending illusions could become delusion??? This was very moving and effectively communicated the feelings of the writer.... wonderful

Nov 28, 2009
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Last Goodbye
by: Anonymous

I love this song. Great work. There is a good melody. The lyrics are good and the words really flow and they work well together.

Aug 02, 2009
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keep up the good work
by: Anonymous

though i do like other styles of music, country music is still my favourite, i am always amazed that just when i think country music has fully matured it re-invents its self, your lyrics are great so keep up the good work

Jul 31, 2009
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Great!
by: Anonymous

Wow these are great lyrics, with a good melody I can see this as a hit song for LeAnn Rimes, Martina McBride, Carrie Underwood... keep up the good work!

May 06, 2009
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Words
by: Anonymous

I'm new here but i've been hanging around TAXI and ASCAP for a while so i've read a lot of lyrics.

CW is my genre if one can have one and then that old Texas Road House bluesy sound is my next.

Your lyrics tell a good story. One we've all lived through so the listener can relate.

I believe, until i hear it with a tune, the words need some work. Not work in that it is not a good set of lyrics but in will they fit a tune. A set of chords, rhythms, beats etc.

I believe if you re-work it in a poetic structure you may find some areas where there are too many syllables to fit a tune in some lines.

I'm not being critical of your lyrics, I am only offering up what i feel after reading them over and then trying to put a tune to them.

Wish you success.

Doc Haley
RiverCityMusic Publishing

Apr 22, 2009
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nice
by: Anonymous

I love country and I think you did a good job at writing this song! Melody brings it to live so I can imagine what it sounds like as a full production. Be encouraged!

Apr 03, 2009
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Amazing!
by: Lids

awesome job..i love these lyrics
if u get the spare time check out any lyrics made by Lids
and tell me what u think =)
but this was an awesome song!

Apr 03, 2009
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Good title
by: Sylvia

I think the lyrics were very good: good rhyming, good story and good ending.
Keep up the good work.

Sylvia

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