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Masks lyrics - Alternative Rock

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Jun 20, 2010
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by: Anonymous

this is pretty good. you put the lyrics together good

Feb 07, 2010
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Jose
by: Anonymous

Hello!

I like your lyrics?
I'm working with some tracks I need lyrics to.
Wanna co-write?

Email me then to joe.lucaz@hotmail.com
Check out my music @ myspace.ocm/joselucasmusic

Talk soon,
jose

Jan 19, 2010
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some suggestions
by: Doc Haley

Tried to hum along with the words,
tried some chords, just won't hunt.
Fourth line is outta place unless you
have a melody you can share?

You wrote:
Sitting here,
Words unsaid.
Thinking of you,
Feeling that you’ve left me for
dead/you’ve taken away
The best of my life.
And now,
There's nothing left to feel.

You could do something like:
Sitting here all alone, thinking of you
Words left unsaid I'm alone in bed
What's a man to do?
Your leaving took the best of me, bout
emptied out my life.
I've lost my love my life my dreams now I'm
high and dry

If this is your chorus then don't have it run
after every verse. find a way to put in a bridge
or pre-chorus instead and get two verses up in
front of them

You wrote:
Your mask,
Has left me void.
I was taken away,
by your lies.
I have choked,
on the phrases left unsaid,
To afraid to tell you how I feel.
Your mask,
Has taken away.

You could do something like:
I was taken by your lies, you swept me away
Learned to love you more and more, each and
every day
Had I believed you walk away I'm certain I'd of
asked
What lies behind that pretty face or is it just a
Mask.

(these are just suggestions not criticisms so don’t
take them as such)

Cya
All Rights Reserved
RiverCity Music
Doc Haley

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