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Jan 20, 2011
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by: Anonymous

This is great stuff! I have a feeling it will be a great song!!!:) Keep Writing! Ignore those people who say you can't!

Jun 19, 2010
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i can relate well and i like it

Jun 12, 2010
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Hi tricia,

I write short stories. Some I convet to songs.

First let me say you have tallent. You're not a bad writer. This is a heart felt story. It's the kind of stuff a lot of people love to read. Unfortunately, its also true I assume. But those are the best kind of stories and songs.

This is not a song. It is a short story. It is much too long to be a song. It has no structure that even resembles a song. If you really want this to be a song, then you now have a challenge. You must convert this short story into a three minute song. It's not as easy as it sounds. But I have faith in you. I think you can do it.

Good Luck
jodyW

Jun 10, 2010
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loved him?
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im sory bout ur bf ..but hey you pull great lyrics outta your pain..keep it up!

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