Thank u all for ur good comments on my song...it was the first song i wrote so i did not know what to do... does anyone know how to get back to the song to do some revision?
Mar 20, 2011 Rating
OPEN WOUNDS COMMENT by: TYLER
awesome lyrics i really enjoyed reading them
Jul 18, 2010 Rating
Not bad! by: jodyWayne
This is pretty darn good. Excellent song structure. Good title. Some good lyric.
The only thing I see I would do different is: I would leave out the second chorus and put a verse in there that gives the listener some idea what this girl did to hurt you.
