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overdose of you lyrics

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Feb 12, 2009
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Really like it!
by: Birdy

Nice one Andy!
Clever comparison between love & drugs - both strongly addictive!
Story flows well from verse to verse. Nice wordplay. 1st line of verses 3 & 4 perhaps a tad long?.
Chorus is good but not as strong as verses ie doesn't make reference to your central theme of 'addiction'.

All in all great song though, should be proud!

Jan 08, 2009
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Wow!
by: Belladonna

this is really great! you need to record this! like seriously... It's something people relate to. Takes my breath away.

Jan 05, 2009
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Pretty Good
by: Haven

hm... not bad at all.
you know how to tell a story, and the links you make between love/lust and drugs works well.

Dec 10, 2008
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nice
by: Anonymous

i really like the concept it is very deep but can be romantic at the same time

Dec 01, 2008
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wow
by: Anonymous

wow that is good... I've written a lot of songs, I posted my best one its called 'Fight On' can u please comment on it?

Oct 10, 2008
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very good
by: Barry west

good lyrics another good story song.the kinda of song you'd hear and relate to.

Sep 09, 2008
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amazing
by: Emily

I love this

It was amazing

Sounds like fell into a relaitonship fast right?

Hey read my other stuff, you might like it if you liked Wanting what I cant have.

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