I like this song, very much. I really like the idea of how you compared each fixed/found each other. It's very very good up to the 1st half. afterwards it kinda gets confusing. what i get from it is that you loved this girl & proved to her that she belongs with you bc u know her the best & u cud make her happy sense she was sad. but then u got sad and she let u go bc the relationship wasn't working out but then u still want her back?
Alay
May 14, 2009 Rating
just my 2 cents. by: Dan M
First I,d like to intriduce myself,Im Dan hello brooke.My comment probally is,nt worth to much,I,ve been writing for a short period of time but have had alot of positive input and recently broke my back.So I,ll be using my mind more than ever.I think your song was from the heart ,and was beutiful,As I said I,m no expert (yet).I think that you made the song just a little to long.Maybe If you downsize it (just for yourself you mite find something that could have somehow be different.Write me back if you would like.I would enjoy it truthfully since my accident I don,t talk to people much and I love talking to other writers .Good luck Brooke,and drop me a line
