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Wanting What I can't Have lyrics

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Sep 06, 2008
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great lyrics
by: andy day

i can see you have put alot from your heart into these lyrics they really are quite moving. great work

Aug 06, 2008
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Good!
by: Anonymous

tracy i like the way you paint the picture of a frustrated woman in love with the Ideal of a Guy who must not truly be all she thought he was.

Jul 28, 2008
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Hello
by: Tracy

What i meant for the story is;

Well I will use an example from one of my pieces i wrote;

"He goes home/ slams the door/ feels like crying on the floor"

Is diffrent from;

"Hey baby/ how is it going?" -just made that up lol.

Thats what i mean in ur song u tell a story and i like that =] its a good idea keep it up. =]

Jul 28, 2008
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Hey!
by: Tracy

This is a good piece. You could be a little stronger in the chorus but otherwise its a good piece. I like how some parts seem to tell a "story" because thats what I do for some of my pieces. Be sure to check out my song called "Games" and hope you enjoy mine. =]

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