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What he sees/ country / lyrics

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Jul 27, 2008
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by: Emily

This is a really good song. Chorus is a little rough, but other than that it flows pretty well. it's hard to just read lyrics with no music. Because I bet you have the tune to this song in your head, but no one else can heart that . So to you it may flow, but to others..it seems a little rough. but I am not dissing your song, I really like it

Jun 10, 2008
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by: mel

howdy - lyrics

i truly like your daddy perspective- i think the emotion is conveyed well. as far as lyrics, sorry for the pun, i know it's your baby, but i think you can make it tighter, more succinct- the rhyme and emotion are there, but the extra lines are a little distracting. there is such true emotion there. strong. focus more on your story than the beats or the assumption of how long.
you have a story to tell.
and i think it's lovely, and has a market.
really. m. (and thank you for sharing)

Jun 08, 2008
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by: Anonymous

I like it!

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