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What if blues lyrics - Blues/rock

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Jan 05, 2010
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Basic Idea needs some melody
by: Doc Haley

It's a basic idea done several ways so yours should be acceptable.
Your chorus is far from what I would think doable because its too repetitive but that may be what you intended.
With some melody it may turn out more understood.

Send us some chords or a lead sheet.

Cya
Doc

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