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Without You Lyrics -Pop/ Rap

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Jul 31, 2010
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by: Anonymous

This is a nice concept and a very good effort, but to me, its a bit overloaded with general statements of love and devotion. I think you should build from the chorus and, in the verses, you could briefly describe a specific event or things that the significant other does, that warrants your affection (again, try to be more specific and describe something relatable to the listeners).

The length, try to keep it down to 1st/2nd verses, chorus and maybe a bridge (24-28 lines is usually the recordable length for standard demos). Make sure your syllable counts are even for timing with the music. I did not know what "differtiated" was, but I see now it was a typo. Also, try to keep your words simple and phonetically flowing.

I hope this helps. Best regards.

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