Really like that.Sounds just like my wife. I think you need to smooth out your patterns a little. other than that I think you have done a great job. I would like to hear when you are finished.
Oct 18, 2009 Rating
graet lyrics, with a twist by: Anonymous
I have to totally agree with the visual aspects of this lyric. The chorus is a very catchy and some kinda great.
I just wnder about a few little items.
the fret line I would drop for something like 'with passion you play all the notes'
I would use guitar, keyboard, or some other instruement, instead of instruement
I wonder a bit also about the progression....verses seem to have different patterns
do like the theme and material a lot...just needs a rewrite of the same material....methinks
could bea winner.......
Aug 20, 2009 Rating
Incredible by: Chris
First off, the title and theme behind this song is genius. I wish i would have created something like this. Second, the visual imagery and the way you backed up ur support for why you were "getting played," is very very well done. The examples you included blend together nicely. One of the best lyrics I have ever read. For real keep up the good work.
Aug 04, 2009 Rating
Wow by: Anonymous
This song just really spoke to me. Or sung to me, I guess. I love the metaphor and the rythm. I can't wait to hear it, and I know a lot of people can relate to this.
